FEEDBACK ON MUSIC VIDEO DRAFT


  • 0:07 - use a filter to brighten the shot/ contrast.
change the filter and make the shot brighter and clearer
  • 0:39 - hes walking the wrong way - hes coming towards her in later shots. the shot of Sams face at 0:40 doesn't work either as its not clear what his face is doing; he needs to look shocked at seeing you.
turn the shot around so hes walking the right way. and re film the scene of Sams face but looking at me and making him look interested
  • i think they are just suddenly together at 1:30 - you need to add in evidence of them getting together.
Sam walks up behind myia as she stops and they say hi and then leave
  • 2:17 needs cutting sooner as we see him walking.
will cut the scene shorter
  • the car wash needs to be much more energetic! throwing sponges, grabbing each other, play fighting, sue of slow motion and speeded up motion - make it really fun-filled.
film/re film some of the car wash scenes and making them more energetic- using slow mo and speeding up the shots
  • you have A LOT of walking - you therefore need to play with speed e.g. slow mo and speeded up to vary your content and make sure its not dull!
get rid of some of the walking and replace it with more interesting footage.

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