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  • be consistent in your menu bar- capital letters or no capitals.
i have changed all the letters to non capitals.

  • your header needs centring. 
i have centred my header.

  • the video channel section needs editing/ replacing with your own content; this is the same on your music page.
i am waiting to finish my music video in order to put my own content in there.

  • about section: is it a they or a he? also not sure i like the photo for this one as he isn't really posing just standing by a brick wall.
i have changed it all to 'he' and i have changed the photo to portray him as a fun loving and engaging artist.

  • on your music page it needs to be clear that you are offering a unique content only available online.
i need to offer brand new content throughout my page 

  • clearer examples of opportunities for audience interactivity.
i have added a 'lets chat' box so that the audience can talk and ask questions and engage in the website.

  • your second page doesn't match with your statement of intent.
i have adjusted my statement of intent to match the website and added what i needed to add.

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